The Snow Bride. Medieval Historical Romance. Lindsay Townsend

Here's a new excerpt from my medieval historical romance, The Snow Bride. The hero and heroine are in a tower belonging to their enemy, the necromancer.


Making torches, lighting them, took some little time. Magnus could sense Elfrida's tension and almost see her fears tearing at her like the harpies preyed on their hapless victims in the old tales that he had heard around campfires in Outremer. She stayed within the tower, calling encouragement to Christina and praying aloud, "To cleanse this space," she told him. She did not attempt to move farther than the few steps they had come from the threshold, for which he was grateful.
"Your sister must be sleeping deeply," he said when she fell silent and
despondent after no replies. "It is the time of winter dark and solid slumber."
"Or she is drugged," Elfrida answered.
Once he spotted her gazing at him, a cool, farsighted, assessing stare. Where he
considered pits and traps, she concerned herself with magical dangers. He knew
she felt responsible for his safety, a strange and queer reversal of nature to
him, but one he accepted that he could not shake her from.
All will be better with more light, he told himself, fending off a vague feeling
of being watched.
Baldwin finally brought two spitting torches. Magnus told the youth to keep up
and took a torch from him. "Do you stay here?" he asked Elfrida.
She shook her head—he had not expected otherwise—and he put her between himself
and Baldwin. Leading the way, Magnus began to pick a careful path across the
nails and snares and wooden stakes, walking steadily and lifting his feet high.
All the while, puffing like a small, furious dragon at his back, he could hear
Elfrida and sense her taut, barely reined-in impatience. She fairly bristled
with it. Not far and all will be well, he wanted to say to comfort her, but he
said nothing, for they had reached the stairs, and it might not be true.
Gray, narrow, worn, and unlit, the stairs were also slimy on certain treads.
Spilled oil or melted candle wax? he speculated, calling out softly in the old
tongue and his own dialect, so Baldwin would know, "Grease, here, step over." He
did not lower his torch. Some things were best left as a mystery.
"Christina, you are safe, beloved. Walter is waiting for you, and all is
prepared for your return."
Elfrida was becoming more urgent and desperate in her wishes. He longed to
shield her from this trial but knew it was impossible.
She is a warrior of magic, besides, and a warrior always faces things. She would
never forgive me if I kept her out of this
Yet it was so ponderous, step after step, climbing in the dark, with the stair
walls and roof feeling to close in around them, pressing down and choking...
Unless that is just me. Since early youth he had loathed shut-in places, which
was why in any siege he had always volunteered for any digging or mining. Now
the disgusting, spineless fears of his boyhood shook down the backs of his legs.
If Christina is dead, will Elfrida blame me? No, she will not..
He trod on an object that cracked and slithered beneath his peg foot. He checked
the cry bubbling in his throat and kicked the unknown thing away, down the
stairs. He heard it flopping into the darkness and vowed to burn the whole tower
with fire once they were done.
If Christina is dead or alive, will Elfrida return to her village? Will she want
to stay there? Ask her, man, and find out!

He was wary of asking and at the same time eager to ask. As much as Elfrida
wanted to see her sister, he wanted to know her mind.
It is my future. Have the stakes ever been so high?
He ran up three more steps and reached the first floor. The staircase continued
higher, but now there was a tiny, cramped passageway, again unlit, and at its
end, a door.
A blue door, he realized, hearing Elfrida's gasp of recognition. He spun about
and gripped her shoulder tightly, in a gesture of warning and support, then let
her go.
He reached out and touched the door with his stump. Elfrida said nothing, did
not try to stop him, but he glanced at her for confirmation.
She nodded, her own hands clenched in tight fists, her face unreadable.
"Baldwin." He handed the lad his torch and set his shoulder to the door, drawing
out his knife—better a knife than a sword in such close quarters.
Surprise was impossible, for if there was a guard, he must have heard their
plodding trail, so Magnus called a final warning.
"Release your prisoners unharmed and you shall not be injured or killed. Yield
He pushed on the stout wood, astonished to find the door unlocked, and entered.

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The Snow Bride

Lindsay Townsend

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